This is no longer my NaNoWriMo entry Part 8.  lol

Every 31 minutes someone is murdered . . .

THE TANGLED WEB  – RADIO DRAMA (Format modified due to Blog constraints)


GLORIA COGLYN – 32, emotionally and mentally strong, decision-maker, married to Jim, and neighbour of victim.

JIM COGLYN – 35, Gloria’s husband, apparently tough and aggressive, wanted for armed  robbery.

TESSA JOHNSON – 29, neighbour of Coglyns, selfish, petty, panics easily and has quick temper and sharp tongue.

DAVE JOHNSON – 31, Tessa’s husband and victim.  He is demonstrative in love and in anger when provoked.

DETECTIVE SERGEANT SMITH – 42, hard voiced, clipped speech, but with sense of humour/irony.

Scene: INT. Gloria and Jim’s living room.


GLORIA   They’re at it again!




GLORIA   What’s that?

JIM           Sounded like a car.

GLORIA   No, I think it’s a gun!  Didn’t you hear them fighting?  They’ve been at it for days.

JIM            I’m sure it was a car.

GLORIA   But you didn’t see them outside earlier.  I did.

JIM           What were they doing?

GLORIA    Well, she threw all his clothes in the garden, and he chased her swearing he’d kill her.

JIM            I still think it was a car.


GLORIA    We’d better call the police.


JIM            You can’t do that!  If it was a car we’ll look like idiots.

GLORIA    But what if he’s killed her?

JIM            That’s right, blame it on him!  She might’ve shot him.  Anyway, it was a car!!

GLORIA    Well if you won’t call the police, then go and have a look.

JIM            I’m not going over there.  It’s none of our business.  Besides it’s pouring.

GLORIA    What if someone’s hurt and we do nothing?

JIM            It’s none of our business!

GLORIA    Well, I’m going over there to have a look, if you won’t.





GLORIA    You were right.  She shot him.  I called the police and the ambulance.

JIM            Is he dead?

GLORIA    No, but he’s real bad.  They’ve taken him to intensive care.  She’s gone.  The place is in a real mess!

FX             KNOCK ON THE DOOR

GLORIA    That’ll be Detective Sergeant Smith.  He’ll want a statement.

JIM            (PANICKING)  I told you to keep out of it!

GLORIA    We’re neighbours.  They’d have questioned us anyway.


SMITH      (OFF)  Mrs Coglyn, just a few questions.  (PAUSE THEN ON)  Jim Coglyn!  What a surprise.  We’ve been looking for you.

GLORIA    Jim!  What’s he talking about?  How does he know you?

JIM            You stupid bitch!  Now look what you’ve done.  Dropped me right in it.

SMITH       He’s wanted for armed robbery at a couple of TAB offices.  You might as well come quietly, Coglyn.  Now about this incident next door (FADE).


GLORIA    Hello?

TESSA      Hi, Gloria.  It’s Tessa.  I need your help.

GLORIA    You’ve got a nerve, calling after what you did to Dave.

TESSA      I didn’t mean to.  I didn’t know the gun was loaded.  I’d had enough of his yelling and lost my temper.  How is he?  Is he dead?

GLORIA    No, he’s not!  He’s in intensive care, thanks to you.  If you didn’t mean to do it, why did you run?  Why didn’t you call an ambulance?

TESSA      I panicked.  You’ve got to help me.  I need money and somewhere to hide.  I thought maybe your beach-house?

GLORIA    I don’t know that I should help you.  Things are bad enough for me as they are.

TESSA      Please, Gloria.  I’ve got no-one else to turn to.

GLORIA     It’s against my better judgement, but all right then.  I’ll meet you at Karen’s Koffee Shoppe, in an hour?

TESSA      Thanks Gloria.  You’re a real friend.

FX             PHONE HANGS UP

GLORIA    Oh, no I’m not!


GLORIA    Detective Sergeant Smith?  It’s Gloria Coglyn.  I’ve just been contacted by Tessa Johnson.  She wants me to meet her in an hour at Karen’s Koffee Shoppe.  I thought you’d like to know.


GLORIA    Hi, Tessa.  You look terrible.

TESSA      I feel like death.

SMITH       That’s nothing to how your husband feels, Mrs Johnson.  You are under arrest for attempted murder.  You have the right to remain silent, but anything you do say can be given in evidence. . .

TESSA      (OVER SMITH’S SECOND SENTENCE)  You bitch!  you bloody cow!  You betrayed me!  I’ll get you for this!


FX              HOSPITAL NOISES.

GLORIA     Dave?  It’s me, darling.  It’s Gloria.  They wouldn’t let me in to see you before.  Are you okay?

DAVE         What?  Oh.  She shot me, Gloria.  Tessa shot me.

GLORIA     I know dear.  I found you and called the ambulance.  You’re okay now darling.  You lost a lot of blood.

DAVE        Where’s Tessa?  Did they get her?

GLORIA     Yes dear.  I took care of that.

DAVE         And Jim?  Where’s Jim?

GLORIA     He’d been keeping secrets from me, Dave.  He’s been arrested for armed robbery.

DAVE        What?!  Oww.  I can’t believe what’s been happening.

GLORIA    No.  It’s hard to take in.  (PAUSE)  I guess it’s just you and me now, darling.

(C) Copyright  Jud House  7/02/2012

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This is my NaNoWriMo entry Part 7.

Every 31 minutes someone is murdered . . .

Well that worked okay.  A bit fiddly to do, but speeds up the action while providing the essentials.  So now you know that your murders won’t go uninvestigated.  Now we can settle down to several Parts of this unfolding investigation, or I can slot in some more murders, complete in themselves, to divert and confuse you.  Of course it would be nice to be able to just get on with what you’ve got and find out how they are caught, if they are caught – plus a little more of why the hell they did it in the first place.  But I don’t want to bore you.

But then there is the problem of using up all my good plots in one novel – if you could call this a novel.  It certainly is beginning to look like no novel I have seen before.  I mean, I know all about Metafiction, where the fact that it is a piece of creative writing is subtly indicated to the reader, so they are caught between the suspension of disbelief and reality.  But I am being right in your face with this work – there is no subtlety about it.  And if I change it now, pull back to hints and nuances, I might lose the spark of the story, the narratorial interest – unless that’s already gone out the window.

As I was saying – I might use up all my good plots, of which I have many.  But then they wouldn’t be available to use in their own individual novels.  But then I could die before I get to write them all.  Time marches on, and unfortunately in my case it seems to have its foot firmly on the accelerator.  A dilemma.

I don’t want you to go off and chat amongst yourselves while I sort this out.  You might give up on me altogether and I’d be writing this to the cyberspace where it could drift around eternally annoying people who find the fragments and think “What the . . .?”

Focussing back to the title of this work though, indicates that I should carry on with my intermittent intrusions of other murders.  Perhaps their locations on this Earth won’t be too important, so that you can imagine them to be in any city or town you like.  That way you can take ownership of them a little.  And they don’t have to all be textual – well of course they will be, but they could be of an audio experience.  That being said I will now add the next one as a diversion.

Feel free to let me know what you think.  I’d be interested to know if anyone out there thinks this is diverting or just a waste of typing!

(C) Copyright Jud House 7/02/2012

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This is my NaNoWriMo entry Part 6.

Every 31 minutes someone is murdered . . .

Mid-Morning – New Years Day

1.              INT             BARKELEY’S LIVING AREA          DAY 

The DSS enters the  kitchen-diner, which is open-plan with the living room and joins STEVEN BARKELEY and his wife JANE.  The DSS sits at the kitchen table where indicated.  STEVEN joins him.  Their daughter quietly watches the television in the living room.

Coffee?  Or cold drink?  It must be hot and muggy out there

by now.

That’d be nice, ta.  White, two sugars.  It’s cooler in here.  (pauses)  I’d like to hear what happened here last night.  All of it.  Don’t leave anything out no matter how small.

 JANE begins to make coffee.

Well, to start with, we had this New Year’s Eve party here.


And house-warming party as well.


(nods) We’ve only been here three months.  There were my work-mates, their wives, and a coupla single blokes.  We had a barbeque from about seven-thirty till nine-ish.  Then we went back inside till midnight, when we all came back out, making a racket, and fired up the barbie again.

JANE puts the coffees on the table, then sits down.  She nods agreement.

STEVE  (cont.)

Joe called out that there was a gatecrasher conked out on the lawn.  We figured he’d come from another party up the street.  Decided to ignore him and let him sleep it off.  He wasn’t hurting anyone.


Did anyone go near him, touch him, at all?


Not that I know of.  Er . . (looks embarrassed)  Except when we were chasing our wives around the back yard.  One of them nearly fell over him.


Which one would that be? (looks at guest list paper)


Marion.  She’s done athletics so she was last caught.


When was this?


After the midnight barbie.  Then we all went inside again for coffee.


Not all of us.  Bob and his rude friend Phil didn’t come inside for coffee.  They didn’t say goodbye either.  Must’ve gone while we were packing up the food to take back inside. 


This Bob would be Bob Coxe on this list? (waves paper)  I take it he’s one of the single men.


Yep  So’s Phil.  They live at the Singles Quarters in the LIA.  (pulls a face)  Actually, Phil wasn’t invited to the party.  Bob was.  He asked if he could bring someone and we thought he meant a chick.  But he turned up with Phil.


You don’t sound too happy about that.


No.  We weren’t.  Phil’s a surly sod.  He argued with most of us last night.


(indignant)  He was drunk and obnoxious.  No manners at all.  Ate more than his share – even ate Marion’s steak before she could grab it.  I thought Tony was going to hit him for a minute.  A real trouble-maker.  We were glad when we found he’d gone.


(passive)  When do you think they left, approximately?  When did you last see them?


Well they were on the patio when we were chasing the wives. (grins)  I reckon we went in about twenty to two.  But they didn’t.  They were certainly gone when we came out to say goodbye to everyone. 


I’ll be talking to them all shortly.

The DSS made some notes in the margin by the list of names.  There is silence for a moment.  He looks intently at STEVE.

DSS  (cont.)

Any idea who the deceased was? 


I don’t know his name, but I reckon I’ve seen him around.  He might work where I do – at NorWest Engineering.  there’s lots of blokes working for them, not all of them at the workshops, and I haven’t been here very long.


Does the name David Hill ring a bell?


David Hill.  Yeah I reckon Tony mentioned that name.  To do with an argument.  You’d better ask him.  He’s been here for ages and usually knows what’s going on.


(consults list)  Tony Merridan?

STEVE nods.  Silence.  The DSS makes some more notes.  STEVE and JANE exchange glances.

DSS  (cont.) 

What order did your friends leave in?  And when?


Well, Marion, Tony, Paul and Janet all left together.  At about two a.m.  The rest of us had more coffee, and talked for a while.  then Sue, Joe, Garry, and Tricia left.  that’s all.  then we went to bed.


When did you cover the deceased with the rug?


After the others left.  jane was worried he’d get cold, so I went and grabbed an old car rug.  I just kinda threw it over him.  Then we locked up and went to bed.


Did you try to wake him at all?


Nope.  He seemed out for the count.

JANE gasps in shock.

STEVE  (cont.)

Sorry.  Poor choice of words.I didn’t bother to try.  He’d slept through all our racket during the chasey.  I figured he’d wake up during the night and go home.

The DSS stands, pockets his papers, shakes hands with STEVE and JANE.


I’ll get this typed up for you to sign.  I’ll be speaking to you again.  Ta for the cuppa.

The DSS exits.  JANE makes more coffee, while STEVE looks out the kitchen window at the police activities beyond.

(C) Copyright Jud House  28/11/2011

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This is my NaNoWriMo entry Part 5.

Every 31 minutes someone is murdered . . .

Okay.  So now I have got on with the investigations, there is another bridge to cross. That of dialogue.  I love dialogue.  You can run the whole story via dialogue.  I’ve used it more or less conventionally so far.  But I need to speed things up.  I’ve been sparing with the description thus far so as not to impede on the impact of the murders.  But I want to be even more succinct.  Especially if I still intend to move on to other murders.

There is a sense that you might become impatient waiting for the next murder, for the chance to experience murder vicariously.  I can hear you psychopaths grinding your teeth and snarling ‘Get on with it!’  Panic not.  Don’t fret your duds.  I have reams of murders, victims, methods, waiting to be used – well 19 possibilties to hand, and others occurring all the time, if not yet written down.  Time is my enemy – I can’t keep up.  And incessant interruptions . . . oooooh there’s another motive for another crime.

Anyway, I need to follow the existing crimes through their investigations to their conclusions.. I can’t leave you all hanging.  I can’t not give you the conclusion.  Or can I?  An open-ended novel.  I have known copies of these to be hurled across the room upon completion by angry, frustrated, disgruntled, incandescent, really ticked off readers.  It is somewhat of a fad to write open-ended, aka unfinished, unresolved, narratives – that leave the readers to complete the tale in their own way from their own imaginations.  But while I can appreciate them, I do not wholly approve.

It is your story.  You know where it is going, and how it ends.  And if it is still going you should say so.  You need to ‘Play Fair’ with your audience.  Unless you intend it to have sequels, there should be nothing left unresolved.  All the ends should be neatly tied up.  And even episodal works need to stand alone within their series.

And I know where this gruesome carnage is heading.  It’s a matter of how I will get it there.  It deserves ‘a jump to the left!’  So I will take the dialogue there – into left field – for the investigations.  Then I might intrude a few more murders, and have their investigations carry on intertwined with the first murders’ investigations.  How many can I do before it becomes thoroughly confusing?  There’s a challenge.  I’m smiling now.

(C) Copyright Jud House 28/11/2011

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This is my NaNoWriMo entry Part 4.

Every 31 minutes someone is murdered . . .

Morning – New Years Day

As dawn dissipated the dark, over at the High Rise, police began taking photos, looking for and collecting evidence, and systematically working their way up the staircases to each level to find where the victim had fallen from.  By the position of the body it was obvious that he hadn’t just leaned over and fallen by himself.  He had landed too far out for that.  He had to have been thrown.

A pallid young Constable stood by the sheet-draped body beside an ornamental garden bed.  The ambulance drivers were impatiently waiting to take it away to the hospital morgue, before the heat of the day really set in.  The Pathologist and photographer arrived and began their work, so he edged away.

The Detective Senior Sergeant and Senior Constable were talking to the tall bearded Bikie who’d approached them on their arrival.  ‘I was working on me bike in me carpark over there, when I heard this horrible scream like someone’s mad about somethin’.  So I looked out n saw him fall the last coupla floors n hit the deck!  I couldn’t’ve reached him if I tried.  It was so quick, mate.’

‘Mad about something.  Angry?  He sounded angry?’

‘Yeah.  Sounded like it.  But it coulda been terror.  I ran over, took a look, tried not to chuck up me guts … sorry, tried not to vomit, then yelled out for someone to call an ambulance, and you blokes.’

‘What about that sheet ?  Was that you?  Or someone else?’

‘Nah.  Yeah.  That was me.  Thought I’d better chuck me ground-sheet over him, coz it wasn’t a pretty sight.  Anyone coulda seen him.  There’s kids live here you know.’

They took his contact details and headed for the stairs.  ‘Only other witness was a woman who was waiting for her husband to come home from night-shift.  She heard the scream, then saw him fall past her kitchen window.’

Looking up they caught the sudden movement of a head drawing back from the top floor railing.  Important?  Or just a nosey parker.

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Mid morning, steamy and bright, the daughter was on the swings, with Dad pushing, while Mum stayed inside sleeping off the party, and the gatecrasher lay still on the front lawn by the gate.  ‘Who’s that man,Daddy?’

‘What?!  Geez.  Go see if Mum’s awake honey.’  Daughter packed off inside, he walked slowly over to investigate the sleeper.  ‘Wake up mate!’

So still.  So pale.  Bloody Hell.  He’s not asleep.  He’s dead!  Lifting the tatty old car rug he saw blood, under the body, around him, and on his back.  Cops.  Gotta call the cops.  He rushed inside to do so.  ‘Don’t panic honey.  Just keep the kids inside.  Put on the TV for them or something.’

Sirens in the street.  The first to arrive was a well-built, tawny-haired Detective Senior Constable, who having checked the body for signs of life, called in the Detectives from CIB in town.  He returned to the body, which he couldn’t search till it had been photographed, and seen to by SOCO.  ‘Have you moved him at all?’  Due to his extremely light, nearly invisible eyebrows and lashes, his gaze seemed unblinking which was disconcerting.

‘Nah I just pulled the rug down and saw the blood.  See there.  Then I ran inside to call you.’  The body looked familiar, but he couldn’t work out why.  He couldn’t see much of him.  His face was in the damp grass.

‘He’s been here since last night, you said.  When last night?  Early?  Late?  When?  And who put the rug on him?’

‘I did, in case he caught his death . . . . We all came out at midnight’ – the weird eyebrows raised – ‘my friends, my wife and I.  We were having a New Year’s Eve party.  We came out for another barbeque, and he was here then.  We all thought he was a gatecrasher from another party.  Too drunk to go home.’

‘I’ll need all your names.’  He supplied them, and their addresses as well.

‘I think I know this man.  I’ve only been here for 3 months, but he might work where I work.  It’s a big company – lotsa blokes go to lotsa different areas.  The others might know.’

‘Do you.  We might get some ID from him when we can search him.  I’ll check with you once we’ve done that.  Go on inside.  I’ll be with you after the DSS and the SOCO team have finished.’  More sirens.  Vans and cars filled the parking bays on the street, except in front of the house.

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No-one went near the third victim.  No-one knew there was a third victim.  Only the neighbour worried, and fretted, afraid to go and knock on the door.  Afraid of her friend’s husband.

(C) Copyright Jud House  21/11/2011

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This is my NaNoWriMo entry Part 2.

Every 31 minutes someone is murdered . . .

Midnight – New Years Eve.

 The attack was swift and sudden.  The blade sliced into his left side and up towards his heart.  His chest ripped, ribs broke, as he stumbled forward onto the knife, pulled out with violence.  He gasped, his eyes bulging in disbelief.  From his open mouth came gurgling, sputtering sounds.  He wanted to cry out for help, to scream his agony and fear to the party-lit street, but he could get no volume.

Without a word his attacker turned and left, purposefully, with no appearance of panic.  Alone, and to the sounds of revelry from every house, he clutched at the nearest fence, staggered along it to the gate, then clung to the gate-post to gain the strength to open it and proceed unaided.  He didn’t get far.  Dropping to his knees, then down onto his hands, he dragged himself about a body-length across the grass beside the path.  With a spluttering gasp he collapsed face down and lay still, as his life ebbed from him, and his senses faded.

Suddenly there was a great shout into the humid NorthWest night.  Cheers.  Auld lang Syne!  People spilled out of the houses and called to their neighbours.  Barbeques were re-ignited and meat was soon sizzling.  Music blared from various sound systems – Michael Jackson competing with Pink Floyd, Meatloaf, ACDC down along the street.

People danced on the grass, and wondered about the gate-crasher who seemed to have had a skin-full.  ‘Should we wake him?’  ‘Nah.’  ‘Leave the poor bugga to sleep it off.’  ‘Fair go – it’s New Years after all.’  Banter.  Laughter.  Arguments as a couple get too drunk and nasty.  The parties break up and people drift off home.  ‘Cover the gate-crasher with an old car rug or he’ll catch his death.’  ‘Night.’  ‘Seeya.’

Quiet descends on the street, on the town.  The humidity mists onto the lawn and the body, glistening in the street lights till they too turn off.

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12.31 am 

The pounding his wife was taking was beyond description.  He’d sorted out the boyfriend, and now it was her turn.  Again.  It had been going on since Xmas.  She’d screamed then, but noone came to help.  Her neighbours, her friends thought they’d make the situation worse if they did, and domestics weren’t considered as priorities at that time.  If they waited till he went to work, they could make sure she was okay then and help her get away.  But he didn’t go out, and she didn’t appear again.

The beatings got a bit worse each time.  Furniture was smashed, he yelled abuse, then forced her to cook his meals without snivelling or she’d cop it again.  The last time had crippled her, broken her legs,and ribs, and she’d lain on the bed, bound hands and feet, in a foetal position, unmoving since then.  Into her mind had crept the incongruous thought of Douglas Adams quote in Hitch Hikers Guide to the Galaxy about ‘bits of her kept passing out’, and had wanted to giggle but couldn’t.  The pain was too great.  Her eyes were all puffy and she couldn’t see, and wouldn’t know if he was standing there watching her.  So she kept still, and when she was conscious pretended she wasn’t.

But it was no protection from the sudden beatings, each more shocking than the last as she had no way of knowing when they would begin.  He pulled her by the hair and flung her, still bound, across the room.  He kicked, and kicked, and kicked, before pounding into her head with his fists.  After flinging her back onto the bed, he quietly picked up his knife.  It had done such a good job on that bloody boyfriend.  Now it was her turn.  Bitch!  He slashed her unprotected body, watching the terror in her eyes.  Then he sorted her face out as well.

Closing the bedroom door for the last time, he went and made himself a cuppa, and a sandwich, and turned on the TV to watch the New Year fireworks replay.

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1.02 am 

In the High Rise apartment complex a drugs deal was underway.  The men entered the dimly-lit central courtyard through the ground-floor car-parks and headed for the lifts.  Pretending to press the button, then retreating to the base of the stairs, the Dealer swore.  ‘The bloody lift’s out of order again.  Have to climb the bloody stairs!’  ‘What floor?’  ‘The bloody top of course.’  ‘Geez!’

Halfway up the mugginess was getting to his Mate, so the Dealer told him to wait while he went to see the kid.  Didn’t wanna spook him anyway.  He might rack off before doing the deal.  He plodded on up.  The Mate leaned on the railing and looked around the compound created by the railed walkways lining the inner walls of the complex.  Geez he’d hate to live here.  Looked like a prison.  He leaned over and glanced down at the courtyard.  At least there were some palms in tubs down there, some greenery.  Mostly paving, but.

On the sixth floor, the drugs had changed hands, the money been counted and the kid had sauntered off.  Descending to join his mate, the Dealer commented on the couple of gay guys in the courtyard below.  ‘They shouldn’t do that in public!  Not even at night.  Kids live here.’  His mate craned his neck to get a look.  ‘What?  Where?’  ‘Down there.’  Pointed to the thickest foliage below.  ‘You’ll have to get on the step and lean out a little.  See?’

He crossed to the lift and pressed the button calling it up.  He returned to his mate, leaning dangerously out trying to see the gay guys in the gloom below.  With one swoop he grabbed his mate’s legs out from under him, tossed him up out over the rail.  In three steps he was in the lift which was ready, barely hearing his mate’s furious frantic scream or the sickening thud as his body hit the concrete paving slabs below.  His head struck the corner of a garden-bed wall, splitting open and spattering its contents onto the cool leaf-strewn surface of the courtyard.

Leaving the ground-level lift he hurried to the courtyard to gaze up as if startled by the scream, as people appeared at the railings and peered down for the same reason.  Several men approached the body.  ‘Call an Ambulance!’  ‘Call the Cops!’  A tall, bearded Bikie grabbed a dropsheet from a nearby carbay to throw over the nauseating sight.  The smug Dealer slipped away to hide in the air-conditioning plant room till it was all over.  Petty blackmail sorted.

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(C) Copyright Jud House 6/11/2011

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This is my NaNoWriMo entry Part 1.

Every 31 minutes someone is murdered . . .

Wow!  How unreal is that!  ‘Course that’s worldwide I s’pose.  But imagine if that all happened in one place.  I mean how would you manage it?  There’d have to be some serious time management going on to be able to get from one place to another in time to commit the next murder, and the next, and the next – if you were a serial killer.

‘Course you could cheat and have a roomful of victims and then line them up and kill one every 31 minutes.  But then you’d have a crowd management problem.  Unless you had help.  But that would take the glory away from you.  Besides it wouldn’t be fun watching the people waiting for their turn.  And you might find yourself feeling too much sympathy for some of them.

Nah.  That would defeat the purpose.  You’d need to be able to carry it out as a clinical experiment.  What the media would call ‘cold-blooded murder’.  But clinical is the right word for it.  And it would only be an exercise to see if it was manageable – do-able as they like to say these days.

You’d have to think it through carefully, methodically.  You couldn’t leave any possible glitch unexplored.  You’d have to find a locale that would allow you to move from one place to another within the time-frame – 31 minutes is not very long.  And in that time you would have to fit in the killing of the victim.  And you’d have to do it silently.  If you were to go round shooting each victim, unless you were moving from sound-proof booth to sound-proof booth, you would barely get the second murder done before you were stopped.

Nah.  You had to find somewhere where people worked close to each other but might not notice that noone was answering their phones for a while, or keeping their appointments.  Somewhere like a Uni campus maybe.  You could walk along the passageways, duck into a lecturer’s office, kill him, close the door and move off down the hall to another wing of the building.  You could watch your clock, as you’d have to reset it as soon as the first murder was done so that the next one would be exactly 31 minutes from the last.  And of course to give you just enough time to pop in and surprise the next lecturer.  It could work.

You could try the same thing at a government department, like the Tax Office.  That’d be funny.  But getting in could pose a problem – they would have heaps of security.  Or the dole office.  Or any big business for that matter, but the major stumbling block would be having a legit excuse to be there in the first place.  So that you blended in.  ‘Course you could be a cleaner – nobody notices them.  And that would give you a trolley to carry your killing gear around under the cleaning stuff, or mixed up with them.  And that
could work at the Uni too, but then again they probably clean after hours there, and for that matter they probably do the same at the government offices as well.  Bugga.

Buuuuuuuuuuttttttttttttttt………….. You could pose as a student at the Uni.  You could be a student.  They have so many mature age students these days that you wouldn’t be noticed.  Besides the kids would probably mistake you for a lecturer.  That’d be a good disguise too.  Either way if you carried around a pile of books noone would look twice.  You could carry a crate of books, plus killing gear, around with you – you’d seen that done many times when you were there yourself as a student.

Yep.  The more you thought about this the more you realised that the Uni was the perfect anonymous place for murder.  Well of this type anyway.

Now.  How would you actually kill them.  This would be the tricky bit coz it would be gross if there was blood everywhere.  And you had to do it without any noise.  The walls between the offices weren’t exactly sound-proof, so you’d want the person next door, assuming they were in their office, and you had to assume that, to only hear the usual murmur of people conversing.  You’d need to have a stock question ready to ask the lecturer, something he could turn away from you to check on his computer, timetable or calendar.  Nah, timetable would be no good – it’d be bound to be stuck up on the wall by the door as you come in.  There’s hardly room to swing a cat in those offices so everything has its place, space is at a premium.  Except for the department heads, and you’d give their offices a big fat miss.

So maybe you’d have to hit them over the head with something.  When they turn their backs on you to look up what you want to know you could clobber them.  But this would leave a lot to chance and it’s not like you can just move on to the next one coz that’d stuff up the whole point of the thing – the experiment would fail.

So you’ve got to enter their office within a few minutes of deadline, have opening dialogue with them establishing who you are, what you want to know and possibly why you want it, and then have them turn away to find it, quite happily, willingly, grumpily, or whatever.  But they must turn away.  Then checking your time you pull out the weapon and clobber them.  Hard.  And once.  There’d be no time for slip-ups.  Time is the thing.  And it would be soooooooo important that you killed them out-right.  Otherwise they could identify you if you only knock them unconscious.  And if they see you before you strike, they might call out alerting their neighbours.

I know!  I know!  You could stick them in the back of the neck, thrusting upwards into the skull, with an awl, or hat pin – though where you’d find one of the latter I’m not sure these days – maybe a stall at the weekend Markets.  Better still shove it into their ear right into the brain.  Either way there’s very little blood, and you can pull it out and take it with you so it can’t be traced at point of sale.  You’d have to coordinate very carefully and surely though – hand around over the mouth and shove, twist, and yank out again!  And you could carry a few spares in case one gets stuck.  Cool!

‘Course you’d probably do a dry run, a test drive to see if it would be feasable.  It would allow you to see what distance you can place between each kill.  Not that you couldn’t return to the first building for a second run at it, if you remain undetected.  And you’d want to be seen around the place as someone that’s usually there.  But the problem with that is that the victims would be alerted to your existence.  Okay if all goes smoothly and they die.  But what if, when you open the door to enter, they say ‘Not today.  I’m too busy to see you today.’  That could stuff things up in a big way.  Experiment failure.

Unless you drop something off for them to fill out and for you to collect at a set date and time.  That way you could ensure your victims were in loco when you wanted them.  But then you’d have to deal with the fact that your details would be on their diaries, time and place, and it would stand out like a flag to the cops.

Well that could be an advantage.  ‘Course you’d give a false name to the lecturers, and the form to be filled out would be of your making and not belong to any legit department.  And you’d make sure they had got it out ready to hand to you before you hit them.  Or you could take it from them and turn away and turn back as they turn back to their work and then hit them.  But it does leave a lot of room for error. They could get up to leave for a class as you leave.  Yep – too many variables.  And it would be important to retrieve the forms coz they’d have your prints on them coz you could hardly
hand them to them while wearing gloves.

(C) Copyright Jud House 3/11/2011

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